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Bloodstained mirror... sounds familiar?

Yep. My big ass story that I never truly stop thinking about, even when I start other projects. That story I swore I would tell someday, even if I don't know exactly how yet.

You might remember that the story revolves around 3 friends who can transform into angels : Ciel, Iris and Alexya. Angels of the blue sky, the chaos, and the divine wrath respectively.
Those are designs attempts for their magic circles, even though they might not be final yet...

I planned to come back to them to improve them a few times, but each time I couldn't really come up with change ideas... The date of the signatures being 2009 is therefore not a mistake.

I am kinda hitting a wall with those : I can't make up my mind on whether the fact they feel so different is a good thing or not...
...and actually, do they really feel that different, or is it just the usual thing of the creator being more maniac than he should?
Should I add stuff on Ciel's? Or remove some on Alexya's...? I have trouble making up my mind.

I would be kinda interested on your input on those, if you have any.

Bloodstained mirror and all related elements belong to me (or is it the other way around? =p ).
Use without permission (of anything) shall result in eternal torment. :evillaugh:
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=WEEKOLDMILK Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
If your looking for a way to tell your story you could always make it a manga or something.
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*HyaKkiDouR4n Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Because mangas are things that are easy and quick to do, everyone knows that... -_-'
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=WEEKOLDMILK Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hey I'm just saying its a great way to tell a story. Its how I'm telling my story.
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*HyaKkiDouR4n Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bullshit. Unless you keep the pages to yourself, I see none on your account.

Drawing a character once or twice is a whole different thing than actual pages or chapters. For me as long as there is not at least 10 pages, there is no "manga" being done, there is just design for a potential manga.
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=WEEKOLDMILK Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I don't post them on my account because I'm having them published. I did not mean to start anything. Lets just drop this now.
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*HyaKkiDouR4n Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have a hard time believing you... if it's true good for you I guess.
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Mood: Cheerful ~Yolleen Sep 10, 2011
[link] your magic circles are so cool! XD
I wish I could draw like you :)
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*RavensHiddenSoul Sep 18, 2010
I love these, especially Ciel's and Alexya's. 8) The swirls around the bird really give it the feeling of freedom and motion, and all the sharp points and angles around the lion make it look very intense, and "wrath"ful. ^^
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~Ruerell Jan 13, 2010
As just a comment, as a symbol, I much prefer the simplicity of Ciel's circle to the other two, though my finding Iris' less-than stellar is due to the bear in the middle feeling not all that serious, while Ciel's feels serious, to me. Alexya's just feels too busy, it has much more than either of the others, both within the circle and without. For a symbol, as I said, they should be almost simplistic. I don't really know what the circles will be doing, or where, however.
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~Hotaru-Suzume Jan 12, 2010   General Artist
I think the skulls(?) on Iris' one look quite strange... I mean it's fine they're there but the way they're drawn looks, at least to me, very dissimilar to the big teddy thing.

And yes, a bit to come off of Alexya's one... the diamonds round the edge, I think.

Converse to ~Alphares, I think the bird's short wingspan makes it look better... and keeps it within the circle nicely.
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